Canada wins GOLD!

I am pretty sure you all know what hockey is. Well, its really a Canadian sport…. not trying to be mean or anything. Earlier during the 2010 Winter Olympics, Canada(favorite to win the gold) lost to the U.S. This was pretty surprising to me and uhh the WHOLE WORLD! Canada had a bunch of young superstars such as..hmmm the arguably the best hockey player in the world; Sidney Crosby. Well, these two teams met again in the Gold medal match. I wasn’t able to watch it because I live in Korea and it was the middle of the night when this game was going on. However, I woke up, went onto ESPN.com and saw the highlights. Man, was it thrilling. People say this game was one of the greatest ever and I would agree! I’m not much of a hockey fan but I got to admit I sort of am now. Canada won in overtime, and my man Sidney Crosby scored the game winner. All throughout sports websites, people are writing articles about how great this game was. IF you did not watch it, you should atleast watch the highlights. IT WAS AWESOME! Well, that’s all I have to say for now. I just thought this game would be something pretty cool to write/talk about. Basically, the game rocked!

Recording & Comments

Recording of May Kim\’s OPE #2

Comments:

Overall, I thought the OPE was very well written. There was an effective use of the grammar patterns we learned in class and all the examples really helped support her thesis. She had quotes to use as evidence although I do not think she cited them correctly. There were a couple grammar mistakes but other than that it was really well written.
GOOD JOB!